A couple people asked me about this on Wednesday. Comments and suggestions welcome.[edit] Thanks for the feedback everyone. I'm removing the bulk of the poem and am almost finished editing it. I plan on sending it out soon.
Occupied
There is an unflagging logic
to bathroom graffiti.
Like a game of scrabble
it is edited,
a scramble of organic
grandiose notes grow
on grout and tile.
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